tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post4485514394900694459..comments2023-11-03T14:23:27.398+04:00Comments on Spreading My Wings: YouNoorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10171691438488980697noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post-65810897744154979162011-11-10T20:10:20.905+04:002011-11-10T20:10:20.905+04:00What about forever?
What is wrong with wanting for...What about forever?<br />What is wrong with wanting forever?<br />Now's enough<br />And a forever promise is...<br />Empty<br />Yet desired<br /><br /><br />^^ I LOVE this part! <br />your poetry attempts are good =D do write some more =)Waed S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16643171070707297588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post-78378572330237313382011-09-26T00:39:35.315+04:002011-09-26T00:39:35.315+04:00Thanks for the encouragement everyone. Much needed...Thanks for the encouragement everyone. Much needed. <br /><br />Wish I could explain the reason behind this one, I don't know myself. I just want to say that if it was something personal and actually had a hidden meaning, I wouldn't have probably published it.Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10171691438488980697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post-76744210740728647712011-09-25T01:09:22.928+04:002011-09-25T01:09:22.928+04:00Even though i'm reading it for the tenth time,...Even though i'm reading it for the tenth time, I feel its different every time. But what I love most about this poem is the ending. Rux already quoted it so no need for me to quote it again :p <br /><br />Always desired <3 <br />do keep writing :)Windswept Dreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101327388609570196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post-22131947668714798312011-09-24T20:43:14.302+04:002011-09-24T20:43:14.302+04:00Nice! :)Nice! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08551919200221452103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post-74146390433025691032011-09-24T18:59:26.484+04:002011-09-24T18:59:26.484+04:00This looks like something written with a lot of un...This looks like something written with a lot of underlying passion!<br /><br />"What is wrong with wanting forever?<br />Now's enough<br />And a forever promise is...<br />Empty<br />Yet desired"<br /><br />Like this part a lot ^Ruqaiyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09111025612138545363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1919990389384591379.post-39505198534006288262011-09-24T01:16:53.360+04:002011-09-24T01:16:53.360+04:00Really good try and I am sure its got some meaning...Really good try and I am sure its got some meaning to it or some event.. but really nice .. its got the feeling of leaving, departure.. empty spaces.. but hope somehow lies thereAmmarhttp://observationofalostsoul.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com